Outline: Introduction (1 paragraph): Argue ------ Thesis statement
Thesis (3-4 paragraphs)
Conservative POV --> Important
- People work their whole lives with their aim of succeeding.
- Success = A good life. No success = A tough/difficult life
- Success brings you respect --> gives you a higher standing in society.
AOS
-Economy (Financially stable, Financial Success(Bill Gates)
-Political (Member of government, achieved power and fame, presidents)
-Society (In the past)
Anti-Thesis(2-3 paragraphs)
- Liberal POV --> Not important
- It is not success that matters, but the process of achieving it.
- No incentives to succeed, everything is provided. (For example, in Singapore, housing, education and medical assistance is offered to everyone - even those who cannot afford it)
AOS
-Modern Society
-Cultural
Synthesis (2-3 paragraphs)
Moderate POV
What kind of success is the question referring to? Financial? Political? Personal?
OR
When is someone considered to have succeeded?
What MUST he have achieve?
Conclusion (1 paragraph)
- Idealistically, success is important to all
- However, in reality, there are many forms and degree of success.
By Fernando, Kenny, Shakeela.
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